I have a draft that exceeds the character requirement of 5300 characters and is not well connected. I’m not sure if it’s tailored enough for medical school. I don’t know if the ideas connect well or are all over the place. I need help cutting large portions of it and connecting the ideas together. you can change it as much as you want but I also appreciate feedback or suggestions. The hidden prompt is: why do you want to be a doctor and why are you special? what will you bring to medicine? how will you treat the patients? do you have the requirements of a doctor? and why should we accept you?