Should include the future from ‘be going to’
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My future plan is going to work and travel. At the end of my studies I thought I’m going to work and travel. Because I wanted to go live abroad ,Going to work abroad and after finishing work to collect money. I was able to continue travelling in that country. It gives me experience of living, learning about different cultures. And also improving English and actually working experiments in the real atmosphere so when I want to achieve my plan I’m going to study hard. I’m going to be more diligent, not lazy .I’m going to graduate from university in 4 years, and I’m going to continue master’s degree so that I can go work and travel. I’m going to learn and practice more English. Furthermore, I’m going to pay more attention to English I’m going to have more English-speaking courage, and I’m going to find a reliable agency so that I can go work and travel more easily. Speaking of who is involved in the plan I think it is myself and the agency that allows me to go work and travel, or maybe the staff that I apply for a visa to travel abroad.